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Intruder Alert

Intruder Alert

Intruder Alert is a creepy story about a man who sees a news report one night about a killer on the loose in the area and hears a noise downstairs.

Intruder Alert

It was the middle of the night and I was in the bedroom, trying to relax. I changed the channel on the TV and saw that the local news was on. At the bottom of the screen, there was a breaking news alert.

“Murderer on the loose… Hiding in the vicinity… Police warning everyone to be on the alert… Suspect is armed and dangerous…”

I was just drifting off to sleep when I was awakened by a strange noise downstairs. It sounded like there was someone in the house.

At that moment, my heart began beating fast and I broke into a cold sweat. Straining my ears to listen, I thought I heard another noise. It was the sound of a door creaking.

It wasn’t my imagination. There was an intruder in the house.

“I have to get out of here, fast!” I thought.

I slipped off the bed as quietly as possible and crept towards the window. My body was shaking with fear and I was hoping I didn’t make any noise.

Just then, I heard faint footsteps making their way up the stairs. It sounded like more than one person. At any second, they would burst through the door. I had to get away.

I climbed out the window and onto the garage roof, moving as fast as I could without making too much noise. At the edge of the roof, I grabbed the drainpipe and lowered myself down until I dropped into the garden.

As I paused, I looked up at the window I had just escaped from and saw the lights go on.

“That was close!” I thought.

A chill ran down my spine as I thought about what would have happened if they caught me.

I made my way to the bottom of the garden and into the woods. Once I was safely hidden by the trees, I broke into a run. I pushed onwards, stumbling through the darkness, moving through the undergrowth, until I came to another housing estate.

Clutching my knife, I headed towards another house.

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  • he was the murderer all along! the news report was about him. “clutching my knife, I headed towards another house.” woah, unpredictable! great job, sfk; 10/10 unexpected plot twists!

  • Oh I get it!… he was the murder all along! I think this story would trick most people into thinking he owned the house. And the people walking up the stairs were the owners! And I can prove it too..” clutching my knife, heading to another house ” MURDERS HAVE KNIVES.. ( ° Ê– °)

  • basically, the intruders were the police and the man clutching the knofe was the murder and he went to murder the peop,e in the next house! Awesome!

  • The two people were his parents and he was the murderer. At the end it says “Clutching my knife I head on to the next house”
    CLUTCHING MY KNIFE. He had a knife in his hand.
    HEADED TO THE NEXT HOUSE. He was going to the next house to murder someone.

  • Ha. Funny. My heart started beating rapidly, and I kept thinking that the man was going to be killed by the intruder only to find out he was the intruder. 7.8/10 Intruders

  • if i were him i would have waited and said “surprise…… let me slay thou….” ..

  • I like the twist, but it could have been more detailed. What would he do? What about some more thought and details?

    – No one is innocent untill something else has been proofed.

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