Night Visitor

The Night Visitor is a creepy story about a young boy who hears an ominous scratching sound as he lies in bed at night. His parents tell him not to worry about it, but the boy is terrified by the unexplained sounds.

Night Visitor

There was a young boy who lived with his parents in a small run-down apartment. They lived in a bad part of the city and there was a lot of crime in the area. Their apartment was on the ground floor of the building and it was badly in need of repair. Some of the windows were cracked and broken and the doors never locked properly.

The boy often had problems sleeping because he could hear all of the noise from the street outside. He begged his parents to fix the windows and the locks on the doors, but they told him they couldn’t afford it. Both of his parents had to work long hours just to make ends meet.

One night, as the boy lay sleeping peacefully in his room, he was suddenly awakened by a strange scratching noise. Sitting up in bed, he strained his ears to listen, but he couldn’t figure out where it was coming from. The bedroom was almost pitch black and the blinds were drawn, shutting out the glare of a streetlight outside.

The boy got out of bed and made his way down the darkened hallway to his parents’ room.

“Mom,” he whispered. “Mom, there’s a weird sound in my room.”

His mother woke up and groaned. “It’s probably just a tree branch tapping against your window,” she said.

“But there are no trees near my window,” replied the boy.

“Then it’s probably just rats in the walls,” his mother mumbled. “Leave me alone. I’m trying to sleep.”

The boy reluctantly went back to his room, but he was still nervous and afraid. He got into bed, closed his eyes and tried his best to relax.
Just as he was about to fall asleep, he heard the scratching sounds again. This time, they were louder, but he still couldn’t tell where they were coming from. He tried to ignore them, but it was impossible to sleep.

Suddenly, he felt a sharp pain in his back. He jumped out of bed and cried out loud. It felt as if he’d been bitten in the small of his back by some kind of insect. He ran into his parents’ room.

“Dad,” he whispered. “Dad, something bit me.

His father rubbed his eyes and rolled out of bed. He examined his son’s back and found a small puncture mark. There were one or two drops of blood seeping out of the wound.

“It doesn’t look like an insect bite,” said his dad.

“Then what is it?” asked the boy.

The father didn’t reply. Instead, he went to the boy’s bedroom and his son followed close behind. He switched on the light and inspected the bed. There was a small hole in the sheet and some of the stuffing from the mattress was coming out.

“I know what happened,” said his father. “One of the springs in the mattress must have poked through.”

His dad flipped the mattress over and looked underneath. What he found filled him with shock and horror.

There was a long knife sticking out of the bottom of the mattress. At the bottom of the bed, they found mud and dirt on the carpet. The bedroom window was unlocked and outside, there were fresh footprints in the muddy grass.

During the night, someone had slipped into the boy’s room through the unlocked window and lay in wait under his bed. The mysterious scratching sound he had heard was someone lying under his bed, stabbing through the mattress with a knife, trying to kill him!

Comments

  1. Aaron devilborn says

    Raffy,satan666,Azhy guys sfk is not human understand.nobody knows how twisted its mind is to add so many scary stories that i thought would exist.SFK WOULD KILL ALL THE MEMBERS ONE DAY BY STABBING,DEVOURING THEIR ENTRAILS AND BURNING THEM IN THE NAME OF SATAN(dont take it seriously)

  2. FAN OF SCARY FOR KIDS says

    I don’t know why there isn’t a positive comment about this story (some comments are not related to story). This was not that bad. Was creepy.

  3. creepygirl says

    himi LOL LOL wanna do that but cant cook popcorn at midnight parents will kill me for not sleeping (i am reading stories secretly.)
    and sas1509 calm down cause it is better not to get your hopes too high as it would be really difficult to find sfk as we dont even know his/her gender
    panda12cool i have a question for you–did sfk ever came………. sorry i cant find the question mark on the keyboard

  4. XxNightmaregirlxX says

    Lol, Scaryforkids, imagine if you got police at your door saying, “We are arresting you on knowledge (I know it’s normally suspicion, but they’d know) that you were abusing two . . . members of your website by threatening to beat them up. You do not have to say anything but what you do say may be given as evidence in court.” And they arrest you? lol

  5. Asfi says

    I think the story is really good. But the comments are even better :P Btw, moral of story: sleep on a water bed (get it? The person stabs it and WHOOOSH)

  6. sas1509 says

    OF THEY EVER CAME TO MY HOUSE TO SLAP ME ID TAKE NYAN CAT OUT OF THE SKY RIP OFF HIS POPTART EAT IT THEN THROW UP ON A KNIFE THEN STAB SFK WITH IT (SORRY SFK) THEN ID BURRY SFK IN A GIANT COFFIN SHAPED LIKE A BANANA DOING THE TANGO WITH A PINEAPPLE THEN WHERE ID ACTUALLY BURRY THE COFFIN WOULD BE IN THE FRONT YARD OF THE WHITE HOUSE WHILE OBAMA IS IN HIS ROOM HAVING SOME “FUN” WITH MICHELLE OBAMA

  7. RadioactiveWerewolf says

    So I’ve been hearing SFK would come over to your house to beat you up for certain circumstances?
    And if he (or she) ever does, at midnight, their gonna meet my inner beast.
    I’ll be turned into a wolf by then, SO Y’ BETTAH WATCH OUT.
    *Using claw as toothpick*

  8. TheWorldWillEnd says

    SFK this story was on here years ago you might be slowly losing your touch ????

  9. Azhy says

    Not very surprising Wolf cause I did experience a lot of things like that LOL :P You new here?

  10. Wolf says

    Wow, most of the comments on here aren’t even related to the story. Surprising, isn’t it?

  11. Raafy says

    @satan666 wow..! Thatss more like it! YOu are a true member of scaryforkids… No hard feelings, right?

  12. Satan666 says

    @Raafy and Azhy, I thought that I love drama was saying that to be rude. I guess u guys are right.

    Sincerely,
    Satan666

  13. Azhy says

    @satan666 I totally agree with Raafy!saying those dirty things wont make you grand… And I know you will say other things after these comments but let me tell you that you will still not be so high! I love drama said that just for fun! C’mon!

  14. Raafy says

    @satan666 yeah bullies and losers are correct, and btw I think that your are trying to be too cool and ended up becoming a loser! Jk dont take it seriously!! :P But you are describing yourself to others by your rude comments that you’re very not well behaveed… Chill! Nobody is your enemy here! Just friends.. k? Isnt it scaryforkids??

  15. DeathlyPrincess says

    I meant to say if it’s still the same owner……..is there any way to delete the last comment

  16. DeathlyPrincess says

    Wow sfk use to be ALL serious now look at s/he. I wonder if it’s the same sfk is the same person

  17. Raafy says

    @Satan666 Even I know karate, kung-fu, and 47 other dangerous words! Beware! :3

  18. Satan666 says

    @I love drama, Don’t be a big fat b*tch!! And Just to let you know, I know karate.

  19. Jazmin_Saintz says

    finally an interesting story that doesn’t involve ghost yet scary :))

  20. I love drama says

    Hey SFK, dont you have to go to someones personal house and slap them? (HINT HINT, person who said first) ; )

    ScaryForKids says: Yeah, that’s right. Satan666 and Panda12cool, I’ll call over tonight to beat both of you up. How does midnight sound? Wait up for me. :D

  21. Panda12cool says

    THAT WAS COOL! And i’d like to say it’s an honour to be second! I have never been second in my life!

  22. Satan666 says

    First!!! I thought I saw this story on this site before. I can’t remember.

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