Left Behind is a creepy story about a young woman who has a nagging feeling that she’s forgotten something and can’t remember what it was.
Do you ever get that nagging feeling that you’ve forgotten something? You know that feeling when you’ve left something behind, but you can’t remember what it was?
It was just after six when I left the office and walked to the bus stop. As I stood there, waiting for the bus to arrive, I had a strange sense of unease. I felt as if I had left something important behind, but I couldn’t think what it was.
Maybe its nothing, I tried to assure myself, but something was nagging at me. I felt like going back to check, but I was too tired. I just wanted to get home.
When the bus came, I piled in with the other passengers. As usual, all the seats were taken. I clung to the handrail as the bus lurched back and forth. I bumped into the man behind me and said, “I’m sorry” but he just looked away.
More and more, I felt that I had left something important at the office. The farther the bus carried me from the office, the more certain I became of it. I went over the day in my mind.
I thought about my creepy boss staring at me all day. I thought about the other secretaries gossiping about how he had a crush on me. I thought about the letters he told me to post. Had I forgotten them? Of course not. I thought about the meetings I had to schedule. Had I scheduled them? Of course.
I wracked my brain for some clue as to what I had forgotten. I told myself that I would feel better when I got home, the uneasy feeling wouldn’t leave me.
I got off the bus at my usual stop, but when I came to the lane that led to my house, I finally gave in.
It’s no use, I thought. This will be nagging at me all night. I have to go back to the office and see what it was that I overlooked.
As tired as I was, I made my way back to the bus stop, back to the office. I was just doing this to put my mind at ease.
As I got off the bus, I heard the clock strike seven. I walked quickly up the side street to the office and turned the key in the door.
Quickly, I ran up the stairs. When I opened the office door, I suddenly stopped in my tracks. To my horror, I recognized what it was I had left behind…
It was me.
My body was lying strangled on the floor.
Did her boss killed her?
Omg at the beginning I was thinking you left ur body behind lady. You left your body I your office. AND I WAS RIGHT!!!! SO CREEPY!!!
Predictable but still cool! I loved the build up.
Just too predictable!
“The trouble is, I can’t remember what I’ve forgotten!”
– Neville Longbottom
Eh, could be better… 4/10 Forgotten Bodies
Quite predictable she left her body behind but anyways 10/10 dead bodies
that wasit scary!it was funny!XD
I love it !! 10 out of 10 rainbows
really good stuff in this so 10 out of 6 cookies
This is so confusing! Actually I get it now. Its okay… 6.5 outta 10 rabbits
Mmmm…it’s ok…I guess…
Hey….. That was an expected ending….. :-(
btw, 5 out of 10 cookies…
Loved the ending!
Too predictable. BTW,nice. 3/10 Strangled body!
Wow! so she was a ghost… umm cool story….. But she can also check that she is transparent or not… may be its her dopplelganger…. it must be her boss who killed her….Yes she must be dead as when she hit the passenger… the passenger didnt respond as she was a ghost… but didnt she came to know when she was killed? i mean somebody attacked her she must remember that…..Anyways best story sfk
@DeathofInnocence, Probably her creepy boss, it says he was staring at her.
This popped up as I was looking for new stories. Great story, by the way. Who killed her?
What? Is he a ghost or something. Oh and BTW, I’m new here guys I live this site it’s the only site I can go to when I’m bored