Acid Rain is a scary poem for kids that tells the haunting tale of a careless child who goes for a walk in the rain and finds his body is slowly being dissolved into tiny bits.
I went out walking in the rain,
but I won’t do that ever again.
The rain came down in heavy drops
It washed away my shoes and socks
It washed the hair off from my head
It took my ears and I turned red
I watched my eyebrows float away
My nose dropped off the other way
My lips went next and then my teeth
I saw them floating underneath
my feet, but then my feet went too
Oh dear, whatever could I do?
My knees turned muddy, then fell off
I opened up my mouth to cough
My jaw fell down and hit the ground
My arms were soft and runny
My bellybutton washed away
It really wasn’t funny
A puddle formed which once was me
The sun came out to dry it
And if you don’t believe this poem
Next time it rains, you try it!
Nice! 9/10 Liquid People.
I agree with NoahTheDead. Nice poem.
This sounds like it was invented to get kids to stay inside while it’s raining. 0/10 liquified remains
Wow! I liked that poem! 8 out of 10!
I think I’m melting!!!!!!! 10/10 acid rains 😃
Haha this is a cool poem (;
Wow nice poem.. Honest speaking, i had always the fear of acid rains….. I don’t wanna ever try this……. CREEPY!
Haha this is kinda funny
It was funny… And sad too… Sorry for the boy
Awesome…love this…its cool.