The Stare

The Stare is a creepy story about a girl who takes the subway one night.

The Stare

A girl was sitting on the subway late one night and she noticed that the woman sitting across from her was staring intently at her. The woman was sitting between two old men. The girl kept looking away, but the woman wouldn’t break eye contact with her. The stare was beginning to freak the girl out.

At the next stop, a new passanger got on. It was a tall man in a grey trenchcoat. He sat down next to the girl.

The woman paid no attention to the man in the trenchcoat. She just kept staring at the girl, who was getting more and more creeped out as time went on. The two old men didn’t even glance in her direction. She pretended not to notice, but each time she glanced at the strange woman the stare continued.

When the train was pulling into the next stop, the man in the trenchcoat got up to leave. Suddenly, he grabbed the girl’s arm tightly and as the doors opened, he dragged her off the train.

The subway doors shut and the train pulled off, leaving the girl alone on the platform with the man in the trenchcoat. She started screaming for help.

“Calm down”, said the man. “I just saved your life. I didn’t mean to scare you but I had to get you off that train. The woman sitting opposite you was dead and the two men beside her were propping her up. “

Comments

  1. jenn3985 says

    “The women sitting opposite you.” “The women sitting opposite *from you.” It doesn’t make sense, Was it a typo?

  2. ashley_girl says

    Hi this is my story about my new life my name is Rachel and me my mom and my dad are the new neighbors we were so exited to ahd moved into a new house i was exited to meet new friends but it was time for bed and so she got she took a bath in her new bath not gross or discusting but peor clean then she washed her hair brushed her teeth and went to bed and her brand new bed. I said “im so exited about this i can’t till tomorrow!” exitedly. But I heard somthing unusual I heard ths screaching noice screeeeeech screeeeeeeeech screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeech it got louder and longer i had to deal with that sound the whole time …….TO BE COTINUED

  3. iisupavibbyii says

    This is basically like another story on this site except the man in the trenchcoat was a doctor and before getting off he told the girl the woman was dead :)

  4. DeathBrynn says

    I formed a prediction that the woman was distracting the girl from noticing the man in the trench coat, and then he would kidnap her and then they would kill her.

  5. terror beauty says

    That was awesome… Didn’t see that coming!!!! Keep posting stories like this!!! Sfk rocks!!! Wooohooo…!!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  6. Username_Invalid says

    If someone stared at me, I would stare right back until my eyes water. Then I would start laughing. Although I’ve got more ways to make them stop staring. Well, dead people are a whole ‘nother case. :)

  7. Creepytati says

    Wow it wz so unpredictable ,i thot da man wz a serial killr wu wntd 2 kill her lol :O curse my twisted mind

  8. I call myself demented says

    I hope she ended up marrying that guy who saved her life. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

  9. lacole luv99 says

    where have I seen this story before?And She should be happy and very grateful.

  10. Castlerock says

    Sakura: Small children usually stare like that because they dont know its rude but a 12 year old? maybe she had special needs.

  11. pinkKaygana says

    @Emma123
    maybe she was staring at you just to freak u out and see ur reaction, ROFL XP

  12. Emma123 says

    OMG! One day I was in a coffe shop, a girl the same age as me, 12 years old, kept on looking at me and wouldn’t eat her cookie or hot chocolate! She just kept staring at me! The only thing that would get her to stop was that some waitress dropped a tray and the girl looked at the tray on the floor! <3

  13. pinkKaygana says

    yeh propping up is a bit like holding them up… wait, so the 2 men bside her were killers or what? it was really scary… and how did the man save her life if the woman was dead? how did he know that the killers would go for the girl?? plz answer my question…. im scared!!!

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