Perfect Girl

The Perfect Girl is a creepy story about a boy who falls in love with the girl who lives next door.

The Perfect Girl

One Summer, a girl moved into the house next door. She lived with her mother and they were quite poor. Her father had abandoned them years before. She was new in town and found it hard to adjust. Although we both came from different backgrounds, she and I got to be friends. We were not very close friends, but I often visited her house and we would talk.

The moment I laid eyes on her, I knew she was the perfect girl for me. Unfortunately, she didn’t feel the same way. She was attracted to boys who were handsome and confident. It was clear that I wasn’t her type, so I decided to wait.

She didn’t have any friends of her own to talk to, so she confided in me. Mostly, she would complain about her life, telling me how her mother hit her, how the girls in her class were mean and excluded her. She also told me about a boy she had a crush on. He was very popular with the girls in school.

As she talked about her problems, I just sat there and listened.

One day, the girl stopped coming to school. As it turned out, it was because she was being bullied. She told me that one of the popular girls in school had found out she had a crush on her boyfriend. The popular girl and her friends would bully her every time they saw her. She said they even spread vile rumors about her to the other classmates and they were making her life a living nightmare.

I just kept quiet and listened as she vented her problems.

Her behavior began to change after she entered junior high school. She stayed out until all hours of the night and began to smoke cigarettes and drink alcohol. I heard rumors that she was doing drugs too. She fell in with a bad crowd and was even arrested by the police once.

Her home life grew even worse and she would frequently quarrel with her mother in the middle of the night. All of the girls in school hated her. Someone sprayed graffiti all over her house, calling her horrible names and saying disgusting things about her. Someone even killed her pet cat and stuffed it through her letterbox.

Eventually, the girl dropped out of high school. She became withdrawn and locked herself in her bedroom. She stopped speaking to her mother and went for days without leaving her room. She rarely came out even to eat. She looked pale, sickly and painfully thin. Her mother took to leaving food outside her door. She would only come out when she needed to use the toilet or in the middle of the night when her mother was asleep. It was a miserable life.

I went to see her for the first time in a long time. She refused to come out to see me and even though I yelled through the keyhole, she refused to answer. Her mother gave me a bowl of soup to take upstairs to her. I caught a glimpse of her when she opened the door to take it. She was pale, drawn, haggard and emaciated. She looked like a wet rag that had been wrung out.

I went to see her every day. After a while, the girl began talking to me through the door. She told me how she was constantly fighting with her mother and all of her old friends had forgotten about her. She told me how she had fallen in with a bad crowd and went out with them at night, stealing, doing drugs and getting into trouble. She told me she was caught shoplifting by the police and she had a criminal record.

She told me how her mother tried to help her at first, but when she wouldn’t listen, her mother flew into a rage and beat her. Her life had become unbearable. She wanted to die and she told me she had tried to commit suicide many times by slitting her wrists.

Just like the old days, she continued to talk on and on and I just listened. Whenever she asked for my opinion, I just shrugged or made some innocuous remark.

As time went by, the girl’s mood gradually began to brighten. She even decided to come out of her room. It seemed like things were getting better and the future was looking positive. Her mother broke down in tears and thanked me profusely.

One day, the girl went up to the roof of an apartment builing in the neighborhood and jumped off. The building wasn’t very high and she landed in the shrubbery. That was probably what saved her life. However, her spinal cord was injured in the fall and she was paralyzed from the neck down. The doctors said she would spend the rest of her life in a wheelchair.

When she got out of hospital, I went to see her. She was lying in her bed, unable to move. She apologized to me over and over and she couldn’t stop crying. She said she wished she didn’t survive the fall and told me she was sorry for all the trouble she had caused me and her mother.

I tried to soothe her and stop her crying, but it’s hard to comfort someone when they are lying down. I embraced her awkwardly. She was weeping so much that her whole body was shaking. She couldn’t even wipe away her own tears.

As I held her in her arms, I asked her to marry me.

She was like, “Really? Are you serious? Me? Really?”

She couldn’t believe that anyone would want her. I had to propose to her several times before she would believe I really meant it. She cried so hard, her tears ran dry. I tried to reassure her and told her I wanted to marry her was because I had always loved her.

She was the perfect girl for me. She always had been.

Even when she ignored me and didn’t return my feelings.

Even when she was hanging out with a bad crowd.

Even when I had to listen to all her stupid problems.

Even when she became so thin and was hiding in her room.

Even when I told the popular girl she fancied her boyfriend.

Even when I was spreading vile rumors about her to her classmates.

Even when I sprayed graffiti all over her house.

Even when I killed her cat and put it through the letterbox of her house.

Even now that she is lying there in her bed, small, weak and unable to move.

Even now I still love her.

You see, she is the perfect girl for me.

Soon we will be married.

Comments

  1. Angel Of Death says

    Well planned,if he hadn’t done all that crap he wouldn’t be with her. But he still a sick bastard.

  2. Cara says

    This is one hack of a Plot twist…i liked it even if im sorry for the Girl…if she won’t find out, she might even be happy with him loving her for so long…cause she still thinks its her fault.

  3. Crystal says

    That means that the narrator was sick psycho lover who did all these tragic events to the poor girl just because he wanted her?! THAT’S SO………………..PSYCHOTIC CUTE!

  4. QueenBitch20 says

    10 dead cats out of 10 dead cats. That picture is Taylor Momson btw. Little cindylou from how the grinch stole christmas.

  5. misscreepellacrackelfur says

    This guy’s a psyco !!๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ˆ

    Poor gIRL!!๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’ ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

  6. Princess Of The Dead says

    Strange love… But the cat part was the final drop the guy deserves to switch places with the girl. He deserves to be beaten and to try to commit suicide and be paralyzed blabla

  7. Murderous ChildrenEVERYWHERE says

    Who I seriously did not expect that just pike geez why do that why not just charm her so she falls for you not fricken ruin her life jack@$$!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

  8. Saliq says

    Whatever the guy did to get his girl, he did used his brain well. And showed incredible patience. Hats off to him he’s a master planner. An evil one. But still, a really good one.

  9. The Light of Lilly says

    Great story, telling about the obsession that is called love. I would have liked more detailed feeling..

    – Don’t fully trust anyone, not even your friends.

  10. jacks_scared_badly says

    THIS GUY IS TOTES STUPS WHY IN THE WORLD WOULD HE DO THAT KNOWING SHE WAZ GONNA TRY 2 HURT HERSELF AND IF SHE DID KILL HERSELF HE WOULD HAVE DONE ALL THAT NONSENCE PARA NADA AND THATS REALLY MESSED UP ESPECIALLY PPL WHO SAY I WILL DIE 4 LOVE THEN U WONT BE ABLE 2 LIVE 2 HAVE IT. WOW PPL HAVE 2 THINK THESE DAYS AND HE DID ALL THAT SOO HE CAN MARRY HER WOWWWW BTW love the story ๐Ÿ˜ป๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜“๐Ÿ˜˜

  11. Riruru says

    @cupcakethrower Because the girl didn’t love him back. He made her weak so she had to depend on him and would be with him forever.

  12. TheDarkArchangel says

    Sophie800021 how is she supposed to find out? I mean her mother doesnt know and the dude is not going to tell her. Its not like she has anyone else.
    Lets face it she will never find out.

  13. MaybelLikesPasta says

    OMG! Great plot twist, I just thought she was gonna die or this was gonna be a sweet story but that last part really got me. 9/10 Psycho Boyfriends

  14. LOLAPALOZA says

    Let someone love you for who you are in life, not who you are at the moment. THAT DUDE SUCKS!!

  15. sophie800021 says

    OMG I HATE THIS DUDE!!!! OKAY SO HE DID ALL THAT STUFF SO THAT SHE CAN OLY DEPEND ON HIM AND SHE WOULD MARRY HIM. BUT WHAT WILL SHE DO WHEN SHE FINDS OUT?!?!?!?! DUDE YOU SHOULD THINK TWICE!!

    BRAINLESS PEOPLE…

  16. Saliq_Khan says

    Guy has brains. Knows planning. Knows how to get what he wants without getting into trouble. 9/10 stuffed cats

  17. cupcakethrower says

    Wait… I don’t get it… Why would he do all that stuff to her if she was perfect for him and he loved her?

  18. XxSmilexX says

    Yes she is the girl for you but you’re not that boy… Like how can someone be so dense? Anyways 9 outta 10 creeps

  19. XxScaryGirlxX says

    O my gosh he ruined her life. I think she is the perfect girl for him but he is not the perfect boy for her.

  20. Random_Appearance says

    This story literally sweep me off my feet! I love it! Unpredictable ending and nice story plot… I really enjoyed it.

  21. candiigirl says

    Wow…I thought that the guy was a girl at first and that they were best friends O.O

  22. PurpleGirlTheHorrorFan says

    That’s so sad…
    The guy must be obsessed with the poor girl……………………………

  23. Cinnamon Songs says

    Why would he kill her cat?! Other than that, great story c: 8 1/2 out of 10 Dead Kitties c:

  24. writer123 says

    This guy already knew she was fragile, so he did all that stuff to break her down further so that she would become emotionally dependent on him. Nice story.

  25. BloodyKillers says

    so mean so mean..the boy isn’t a perfect boy for the girl.
    Poor girl..8.5 out of 10 perfect girls!

  26. hunter.of.the.lord says

    At the end when he said she was perfect for him I thought it was sweet then I saw “listen to all of her stupid problems” and I was like oh yeah these are scary stories

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