Tell Me Your Story 4

Heart Art

Heart Art is a story submitted by a user on this Website who is nicknamed DEAD scary. It’s about a little girl who is very fond of art and makes papier mache hearts.

Heart Art

Heart Art

A few years ago, in San Diego, a small family (mom, dad and daughter) moved into a big house. The daughter loved art. She was very clever when it came to creative hobbies and artistic pursuits. She especially loved papier mache and often painted the sculptures she made out of paper. The strange thing was that she only made painted hearts.

One day the young girl was walking home from school, when it started raining. She decided to take a short cut through a small abandoned church. Until she fell down an empty grave and banged her head and fell unconcious. Meanwhile, back at her parents house, her dad was reading the newspaper when he came to a huge headline about the local abandoned church where devil worshippers were doing their rituals.

At that moment they heard rustlng and smashing of plant pots outside their door and when they opened it, they found their daughter standing there with a huge meat cleaver and two painted hearts. Her eyes were rolled back in her head and all you could see were the whites of her eyes.

Suddenly, she slit open her mom’s chest, ripped out her heart and ate it. Straight afterwards, she did the same thing to her father. She pulled both of their bodies out into the empty road and stuffed a small painted heart where their real hearts should be. Then she disappeared into thin air.

Maybe she’s outside your door now, and she has plenty of painted hearts ready!

(Plz tell me if it was good enough and I hope it gets put on your website! Sorry the beginning was long and boring!)


  • Omg!!! I heard a knock at my door 0_0 but it was my friend lol right after I read that part I heard bang bang bang so I grabbed a saucepan and my sisters Barbie carriage (ikr) and I opened the door. My friends like hi! I’m like NEVA DO THAT AGAIN 0_0 OK WHERE’S THE KNIFE and she says … Okay…

  • Creative Indeed, And keep posting… I’ll like to read more of your stories…
    YESSSSSSSS, I’m First in 2013… Happy Valentine’s Day, The hearts of this story reminded me to tell you… :)

  • best story ever! it’s a bit shorter but awesome! i like it! you should write some more :D

  • Hmm,it’s pretty good but it’s too short and could’ve used more details.Sometimes it’s good to cut it short but you can’t cut it too short or it feels like you’re missing something

  • O MY GOSH!! ^0^ can anybody go to the Tell Me Your Story section? Check out my story and tell me if it’s good..

  • “Sorry the beginning was long and boring”.. what? That wasn’t even long AT ALL, in fact, it was too short, and there wasn’t enough detail. I would’ve liked to hear more about the devil worshippers and whatever they did to her. ‘Cause all the sudden it’s like ‘POOF! SHE’S EVIL NOW!’.

  • Tee-hee! I love the idea of stealing hearts and stuffing fake ones in their place! So twisted! XD

  • Here’s a little problem…I used to be VERY creeper out by scaryforkids stories…but now I’m not scared anymore!!! Could someone please give me a frightening, awesome spine chillier haaunting story I could read…and if you please help ill even give you one of nh best scatter story I know…the worlds scariest story!

  • This is awesome :) Just saying, but more details would make the story even greater, even though its great just the way it is too :)

  • GOD DAGNT! when i finished reading the part that says “Maybe she’s outside your door now, and she has plenty of painted hearts alreasy!” my dog barked loud like there was someone there. strange thing, there were no people, no cars going by, or anything and my dog was barking at my door!

  • I applaud you for not trying to take up too much space, but don’t forget the details to why and how. I can tell that she was somehow zombified, by how long did it take the father to read in the paper what had happened? and some of the ritualists would have been nice too. So mystery is great, but too much leaves the crowd wanting more. I enjoyed it though, so send another!

  • That was… Abrupt and shocking… I will never look at a paper heart the same way. O_O

  • its missing a plot the story doesnt really make sense you couldve added alot more details instead of cutting it short but good attempt

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